This poster does a clever job of showing (rather than telling) how easily redundancy can slip into our writing. If the subject of redundancy interests you, you might check out this series of posts:

• The Department of Redundancy Department: Tautology
• The Department of Redundancy Department: Pleonasm
• The Department of Redundancy Department: When Repetition is OK
• The Department of Redundancy Department: Scesis Onomaton

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